This week in Moana My writing group had to write their own peom inspired by James K Baxter
The town was usual enough, it had
An ocean, a ladder, a dairy, a sky and even a huge wharf I always went to.
My sisters, my cousins and I did what family do-Jumped of the tall wharf, made sand castles,
dodged the sand balls, walked like mouse through the mad family trying to get to the food, ran up
and down, waved goodbye
Doing nothing important
Written by Kohine
Inspired by James K Baxter
We used the first and last senteces from James K Baxter and also got an idea from his peom to add in 5 nonus and 5 strong verbs.
My poem reminds me of Tolaga bay and it makes me feel happy.
My poem reminds me of Tolaga bay and it makes me feel happy.
